can anybody correct my mystakes please? ive been study english for a while, but im not sure it is correct…?

Lots of people told me that in greece the most beautiful places are: zante, corfù, santorini, and mykonos –> (party alcohol and party again!) but i know that creta should be nice as well!
anyway in 3 weeks i’ll go on holiday on a cruise: tunisi , palma of mallorca, barcellona and marsiglia, i will relax in a stunning cruise :) i can’t waint :)
on december i will go to visit a former mcdonald , this guy was working with me in the kitchen, his name’s abel, he lives in copenaghen!
on january i will visit my former flate mate in spain to seville !
always on january Ill go back to Budapest for 6 days….
and after this 6 days…. ill realize my 2° dream : New york :)
my 1° dream was Budapest 1 year ago… :)

does it look good? or is it a shit?? <— can I say this OR ?

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